Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Johanna

4 comments:

  1. The photo of Caroline looks too photoshoped in my opinion, it almost looks fake. But I do really like how piercing her eyes are. The lighting on Jordan is really lovely, that extra light on her ear makes it super nice.

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  2. Love almost everything. The depth of field on the strawberry slide does feel like it should go one way or the other like the class talked about. The hand in caroline portrait takes my attention away from her, on the glass the dark spot on the top left of the lip bugs me a little. My least favorite is the still life of the containers, a different composition would attract me more I think.
    Sorry most of this was stuff the class already talked about.

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  3. I love the clean simplicity of your images. Even though the background is white, it seems so interesting, like all of your objects are in their own little universe. Especially the strawberry slide. I love the angle and the way they all interact with each other. I really like your portraits and the way they are shot, but they are slightly over photoshopped, but they are still very nice.

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  4. I like the close up portrait. The lighting is dramatic and her facial expression intensifies the feeling the photograph gives off. I feel like the portrait of caroline could be cropped a little tighter off of her chest so we could be more drawn to her face. With the strawberries I agree with what was said in class about the green of the leaves needing to be more vibrant. The portfolio is cohesive in that all of the photos are very simplistic.

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